The concept in general isn't bad, but definitely the fonts you're using are way "out of character". Mayhaps, Tony Stark will be in china, but not as a ninja but wearing his Iron man mechanical suit. So, the 'Kung fu' and 'Jetsons' font I think they don't go very well with the Iron Man concept; specially for an intro. The other one you are using for the black letters looks better.
One of the effects I did like how you made them, were the blue beams behind the letters, those do suit Ironman.