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Lame Punch

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So this may be one of my better animations, at least i think so. Im starting to get into making music also, so tell me what you think of my music making. (i made the two songs in the movie). Yeah so thats about it, hope you lads enjoi

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Not bad! I loved the Mortal Kombat like concept that you threw into your animation (The close-up x-ray shot of the one guy cracking the other guy in the skull with his leg). There nothing more to really say about this short since there's no plot or summary or anything, its just about two guys having some fisticuffs at each other. Audio wise your soundtrack is okay since its accompanying the scene in a normal matter since these are two, normal average joes right? I'm going to bestow you a 2/5. And a 2/5 in voting power. You did a decent job here friend. Keep practicing, creating and contributing here. I hope you've enjoyed this review friend. Good day.

I've been sorting through some pretty bad animation lately, so yours was a pleasant suprise. You have a very unique style, and you capitalize on it pretty well. The movements of your characters were very fluid and natural. Bravo!

Maybe this was meant to be short, but I felt it could have used much more substance. . Not sure what, but it felt unfinished.

Congrats on your first musical score..To be completely honest, it could have been better. It really threw off everything else and didnt quite fit the mood. Overall, I feel you did a very nice job. I look forward to your future submissions.

Credits & Info

Views
2,007
Votes
2
Score
2.75 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 17, 2012
7:58 PM EDT