the animating was gud, but a bit short

You came up with this in a day? Dude you need to do a longer flash, make it like a month long project or so, and I bet you could have a hit on your hands. I liked how clever and relatable it was. Keep it up!

take one.....psh....

Pretty good, I like how it ended. Also, the way the guy's scream sounded was funny too.

That was quite funny and hilarious! The duration for this flick was quite short, however it did leave a big smile upon my face. Your style was quite simple. And audio was very well done, especially on the voice acting. And I've learned a very important lesson within this short. The moral of this story is heed what is written lest you feel the cold swift hand of justice befall upon the aggressor. You've done well friend! I'm going to bestow you a 2/5. And a 2/5 in voting power. Keep practicing, creating and contributing on here. I hope you've enjoyed this review. Good day.