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Lunch Stopped Short

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The downside to being a snail.

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nicely done. though to me it felt like it was missing something...not sure what though

That was very original and funny! Style wise it was bland, plain and simple. But it was the hilarity and the message that ensued and prevailed above all else in this short. Audio was decent as well, especially to add minor understanding and "tension" for the Snail's perspective. I reiterate from before, the story is very original. A simple snail is out and about near a park or public resting area and is enjoying a quick bite. Then the calamity and horror approached from above! ... You've done very well my friend. I'm going to bestow you a solid 3/5. And a 3/5 in voting power. I really liked this one since it has alot of original concept to it, particularly the story and the situation presented. Keep practicing, creating and contributing on here. I hope you've enjoyed this review friend. Good day.

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3.04 / 5.00

Oct 12, 2012
9:40 AM EDT