I found this to be rather strange. However this is improvement to this which is much better. Given that this is a trailer and not a finished product, the sketches of scenes that will appear look promising along with the two odd faces at the end, possibly siblings/friends?
The animation here is seen very little. Aside from the face looking side to side and the two dots moving along a canvas, the rest is very still.
The audio fits the situation building up suspense as one wonders what will appear in the full version.
Overall, good improvement, looks promising.
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This is a psyhological one,so many things are in fact very sugestive
Having never spoken German in my life, I couldn't quite comprehend the flash. However, I still thought it was very good. The drawings, while fairly crude, had a unique style to them that made the entire flash look better as a whole. I also liked the sense of tension that was conveyed throughout the flash. The slow build in the music with darkly lit scenery was absolutely delightful.
The flash still has a few things that I think should be fixed in the final product. There was too much usage of the color white to the point that some panels had nothing but a white backdrop with a crude sketch of a few characters. While I said earlier that the crude art is what gave this flash it's substance, there is a fine line between aesthetic and laziness and this is beginning to toe the line so to speak.
This could have also benefited from some voice acting. The points where there's just a black screen with some text would be perfect for a creepy announcer voice (maybe in german?) to further exemplify the mood.
Overall, even though I couldn't understand it, it was still a good flash.
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As you have seen the flash is looking forward only to be a
The text say "Subconscious " as title & "there is a place
where everything is divulge.
The graphic must be cruel,but I think I might have found an
answer to it quality.
& congratulation,you are the first who understand the atmosphere
& nature of the story.
I thought it was creepy although it looked real sketchy, example the cars headlights... one was ahead of the other one, which would make no sense. I like that you used actual hand drawings though, that was a nice touch, gave it a creepy look.
That the point.
To be creepy.