3/5 scored and reviewed
A very big improvement of what I've seen, smoother animation, good lip synching, pretty fluid all around pretty good. But good god man, that voice of yours simply can not pass for acceptable. Please get some voice actors, you can post VA wanted ads on the flash forums, many do theirs for free, at least do them for Female voice acting roles, as clearly, yours doesn't cut it, not even for funny.
Other than that, ok joke, even though obvious and quite predictable. I like the improvements though, they quite out shine the negatives in this. Just get some better VA's and perhaps a better script, your ideas are ok but they aren't all too original or provide a very big punch. I do a bit of script if you're interested. The best kinds of flash are a team effort pulled from all over the community, don't be afraid to ask for help. Keep it up.
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