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Garden fairy

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This is a short story about a garden fairy! I hope you enjoy it.

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I watched a few of your videos and they're definatly putting a smile on my face (and that actually... is a big thing). So yeah... take my stars!

Thing is... you can do much better then this and get a better general rating. You can and should improve your artwork, since you seem to know how to draw (you put every asset in the right place but with fast and sloppy lines and taking shortcuts in animation). Maybe your goal shouldn't be pumping out a video as fast as possible but making a good one. Which is also a better marketing strategy, something I -as a nooby game developer- started realizing after releasing my share of easy flash. My suggestion is... try making a video with better art, but simpler animation. So simpler movement and stuff, so you can reuse drawings; by only changing the arm movement or something. I think that wouldn't cost you that much more work but will be more apreciated by a general public. Good luck with your future development, feel free to give me a poke when you need an oppinion on a future animation.

flashmakeit responds:

Thank you for all the inspiring words and useful information. :)

I thought a little tight...but different.thanks

flashmakeit responds:

Thank you!

Not enough dragons.
5 stars

flashmakeit responds:

You are the best!!!!!

That was just plain weird

flashmakeit responds:

Almost as weird as your icon. Happy Halloween.

this looks like it might have had an interesting story if someone more experienced in flash made it. keep practicing and come back to this someday

flashmakeit responds:

Okay I will keep practicing.

Credits & Info

3.25 / 5.00

Oct 1, 2012
2:59 PM EDT