Of course a practice is going to get a sucky score,interesting art style though.
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This was done as practice and seeing how I finished it I thought I'd throw it up, there's absolutely no story. Apart from the fact that one character wants to fight.
Enjoy.
DillonBrannick responds:
thank you. You're right, especially because story and length can play such a huge part.
The animation is good, especially the 3D-ish rotation. Seeing as how this is practice, I can forgive the lack of a story or smoother art or anything, but do try to use higher-quality sound effects in the future. The music is all right, but the sounds literally hurt my ears. You can record your own sounds or just search Google till you find something you like.
Also, you may want to select a song that matches the length of the animation. Either that or cut the song when the animation ends. It's a fun song, but letting it carry on after the apparent end just seems unprofessional to me.
DillonBrannick responds:
Thanks for the review.
I'm trying these days to put in rotating camera movements, although at times it does get tricky and confusing, I'm sure I'll get it eventually.
I'm planning to start recording my own sounds as soon as I can get a decent sound recorder.
As for the song I did what you said and faded it out near the end.
I love constructive criticism it's what it's all about, thanks.
Well done, at first I was thinking the "logos" were the most exciting part of the video. But as I was watching it I realized it was a very interesting and unique style of animation, definitely grabbed my attention.
DillonBrannick responds:
Thanks for the review.
I appreciate the 5/5!
Cheers
