I gotta be honest, this wasn't very good.
Granted, you had to make it in 48 hours and it had to be on topic, but this was just bad. The animation was terrible, the voice acting was mediocre at best, the title wasn't grammatically correct, and it was too short. Then again, it WAS good for a quick chuckle, but that's not what I'm reviewing, I'm reviewing the quality of it, which just wasn't good. I personally couldn't do better, but I at least know what I'm talking about...