Just simply unimpressed. The humor wasn't just ddry but it didn't even fit into the general theme of the attempted artwork. Animation wasn't half bad considering these are free worked animations but overall... I blam this.

Well done! This episode screamed original situation all over it! You have some high leveled executive/owner, a individual who is not happy on what form of consumerism is brought forth int their eyes and a grotesquely, large, obese fat officer of a law that is not very bright upstairs. In fact that man's brain would be considered vacant as reflected on the unspeakable thing that he did to the "evidence". I'm going to bestow you my friend a solid 4/5 and a 4/5 in voting power. Your getting better and more improved the more you continue along with your series. Keep up the good work and keep spreading laughter and cheers to everyone here just as you've did for me! I hope you've enjoyed this review. Good day.

First off,fix the title.Ok so the animation wasn't half bad all together but the voice over work was lacking big time.Do fat people always talk slowly and seemingly unaware of what's going on around them?I get what you were going for but the voice just didn't reflect it and just seemed generic.That's besides the point though,the writing was the main downfall i suppose because it just wasn't engaging to say the least.You have some talent so next time try a little harder on the voice acting and do rough draft after rough draft until you get a script that is guaranteed to get a few laughs,if comedy is what you're going for that is.