Moon Colony Episode 1

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Reality television goes to the moon! Tune in and watch Captain Jacob Adams lead a volatile colony bent on self destruction, as he tries to maintain his sanity in this science experiment gone wrong.

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concept was good but you need to make more fluid animations perhaps by adding more fps?

try to buy a good mike coz the mike has a slight echo effect
thats all keep rockin!!!

esteiner13 responds:

Thanks, I have no formal education with Flash so its a slow process but I'm working to try to improve in all aspects technically and creatively, I'm really excited about the possibilities story wise with this concept, so despite its technical shortcomings I hope it did entertain you. The echo effect on the mic is actually intentional, I put it on there while I was recording it. I thought that it was good for the "moon base" as an effect, to convey what an isolated, claustrophobic environment they are trapped in (Like being trapped in a closed, empty, coffee can). Maybe I could have done a better job with the environment visually to express this. I also placed a few effects on the voices to try to make them different as my vocal range is somewhat limited, and characters tend to sound to similar to each other when I hear them back. I'm hoping to get some help with characters in future episodes to fix this. Thanks again for the constructive criticism, I'm definitely working towards improving the concept and hopefully you'll tune in for the next episodes to see the improvements I make and see what happens next in the story.


animation was horrible, and voice acting was horrible.

esteiner13 responds:

I put a lot of work into this thing, the least you can do if you are going to give me some criticism is be constructive. If you've got some great ideas and expertise why dont you put your money where your mouth is and throw it up on here, I'd love to see your genius at work.

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1.25 / 5.00

Sep 27, 2012
10:30 AM EDT
Comedy - Original