I really like the designs, they were pretty well done, but just about everything else was just awful. First of, the animation was stalled and heavily tweened. Second, the voice acting was just plain awful, especially the guy who did Ray. Finally, it just wasn't funny.... AT ALL. Having a guy break the fourth wall by staring at you then commenting about it does not equal humor. Like I said, visual-wise you're doing pretty good but nearly everything else needs a lot of work.