I really like the designs, they were pretty well done, but just about everything else was just awful. First of, the animation was stalled and heavily tweened. Second, the voice acting was just plain awful, especially the guy who did Ray. Finally, it just wasn't funny.... AT ALL. Having a guy break the fourth wall by staring at you then commenting about it does not equal humor. Like I said, visual-wise you're doing pretty good but nearly everything else needs a lot of work.
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insertnamehere85 responds:
Hey thanks for the review. Yeah I typically rush through the animation process by tweening and I could definitely use some acting classes. If you didn't find this one funny, please take a minute to watch one of my other Valbrook Quickies. I tend to experiment with different jokes and characters in each one. Thanks again for the criticism.
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Daily 3rd Place September 25, 2012
