Hey I'm grump
I'm not so grump
HOLY CRAP I LOVE GAMEGRUMPS
Author Comments
Hello there, this is my first animation on Flash! I also used a mouse to draw... so please don't be too harsh with ratings, etc. Sorry for not having a menu, but I haven't learned how to do that yet :s Also, please post some reviews with constructive criticism!
Anyway, please enjoy this short Game Grumps animation made by me! :D
This video loops, but isn't feel good looping a bit. If you can't make a menu, you should put your animation on youtube instead of newgrounds. The animation wasn't really SPECTACULAR!, but it was funny. ....you should really put this on youtube instead of newgrounds though.
StalkerPT responds:
I am indeed going to put this on YouTube, and sorry for not having a menu, I felt really bad for uploading it with no menu... I will make one for the next animation I make though!
i honestly enjoyed it. i don't care if the animation was bad or what it made me crack up. and it looks good even if it was drawn with your mouse dude, keep this shit up!
StalkerPT responds:
Thanks! I'm not sure if I'm going to animate more often but if I do I am considering the purchase of a Wacoom Bamboo Pen for 59 euro! :D
It's an okay video, but the choppy animation and basic drawnig style makes it seem more like something you'd make to get an idea created before you forget it than it does a complete contribution to the site.
Improve the art style a bit and work on making it more fluid and you'd have a good animation on your hands!
StalkerPT responds:
Thank you! As I said this IS my first animation, not to mention the dificulties of drawing with a mouse... But as I said in another reply to a review, if I start to make these more often, I will probably buy a Wacoom Bamboo Pen or something, which should mean slightly better drawing. Also because it would take less time than with a mouse, the lazyness would be less, therefore making it more fluid! ;D
This was simple yet very decent. I'm literally cracking up just from the audio conversation itself. The style is simple bland yet it captures the scene on whats being played on the audio. The audio is top notch. I usually asked for a bit of a longer short yet this seems perfect in a "random moment" kind of sense. You managed to get a big smile on my face. Favorite moment where Egoraptor thought he had the game in the bag which unfortunately for him it was the opposite. I'm going to bestow you a 3/5 and a 3/5 in voting power. Keep practicing, creating and contributing. I hope you'ev enjoyed this review just as I have enjoyed this goofy, hilarious short. I'll never get that excited squeal from Egoraptor's voice again now! Again congratulations friend! Good day.
StalkerPT responds:
Wow, I don't think I ever read such a helpful and nice review as yours! Thanks for the huge motivation and I'm really glad you liked it! :D