I thought it was really rad, I like the style :D All I can suggest is more humor or something, you know, to keep it fresh throughout.
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Ollie hates math, specifically algebra. It is custom in whereverhe'sfrom-istan to pee on things you don't like. But Mr.Derp is on the case. Mr. Derp always gets his man.
This was quite intriguing in art style and tone. How it was presented was in a crude light yet it was so surreal in a minor sense. Audio was a bit too soft in tone though I heard some of it by sticking my face close enough to hear the speakers to some extent. Again I was taken aback by the unique crude style of your artistic style i really admired it sense I'm a very huge fan of surrealism of any kind and this was just one of them! I'm going to give you a 2 in a half out of 5 and a 3/5 in voting power. you've done a wonderful job here friend! I hope you keep practicing, creating and contributing on here. I hoped you've also enjoyed this review. Good day.
pretty good
things like better audio and better pacing will come with time