Actually very nicely done. Easily one of my favorite flashes from you.
It's a decent effort and I can appreciate the effort put into the storyboarding and storytelling. I'm going to assume the focus is on the storytelling rather than the artwork, but in case it was on the artwork:
-Some of the handwriting was sloppy
-A helpful tip: For the brush tool, click "Use Air Pressure" it makes it look pretty neat
You did a nice job of making Lubch look mean, though calling someone an idiot isn't necessarily what I'd consider mean but your decision.
There were some typos in subtitles (destory) that made it look a little odd.
I really liked the music.
Those were some very nice music choices, I should use Audio Portal music more often.
The William & Sly music (The Valley) was surprisingly fitting and went well with the scene, and the animation was pretty good.
REALLY NICE use of effects. The blurring, motion tween easing - I'm talking about 2:55 - very nicely done, couldn't do better myself.
3:41 - rolling the screen up - nice use of squash & stretch.
I am pleased to say this was pretty funny too ("Where to so i can come say hi?")
Really good stuff
Would Watch Again