I think you should have drawn the letters instead of used typeface. It made it feel out of place. Also, I think the voice acting script is fine, but the vocie itself is not fitting. You should have obtained the collaboration of a different voice actor, maybe a deeper voice would have worked better.
lol. this guy.
lesson of the day: Dont be like danger dan over there
Ten out of ten for weird!
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