DB AF: Episode 2

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This is epsidoe two
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it's not bad, but it's not great. maybe because i haven't really researched dragonball AF, but mostly because of the animations. but the blasts looked cool.

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Winglessangelful responds:

Thanks ^^

Its to slow of a story line and not well made

Pretty good. I think people are expecting too much of you too soon, because you did just start making these and I'm sure that the movies should get better over time. The story you are stitching right now seems to be very good nad I can't wait to see where this is going. Also, the sound bites and music from the original are included in fitting moments. I will admit, a little bit more diversity in the fight scenes (namely the physical aspects) will be nice, but it's not really a killing point at all. Nice job and keep up the good work.

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Winglessangelful responds:

Thank you :) And i KNo what do they expect? some 3D animation -__-

I sorta agree with the guy below me, Your movements are incredibly choppy. You need to watch dbz flash styles like SMBZ and Sonic's Quest for power. That one will give you a GREAT idea of how dbz style flashes are supposed to look.

First, the blasts are supposed to be transparent. Second, some explosion effects would be preferred to the blasts just disappearing.

The grammar does need some work, that can easily be fixed by having people proofread your script.

Lastly and most importantly... HOLY CRAP. That was laggy as hell. Not only that, the file size is FAR larger than it should be for a project this size. It should be just under 10mb. I have seen people with projects longer than this bring it down to 8mb. That might be why it's laggy, but I don't think it is.

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Winglessangelful responds:

your comment is not needed Unless it;s adviceful

this is an insult to the dragon ball original

Winglessangelful responds:

your Dumb MOVE

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3.42 / 5.00

Sep 7, 2012
2:25 PM EDT