ok..

3 things: Get a graphics tablet, helps a ton with art style. Story board. Practice makes perfect. I gave it the extra star for including the play button and not looping the clip like some others do.

Pretty much pointless. Besides, you should try with more frames so you get a more smooth animation. The drawing style wasn't all bad, though. But it's still pointless.

Nice effort! Even though this animation wasn't a great thing the main idea behind it is you've accomplished something. You've endured a bit of time and patience to get your results and if you go further into this field with graphical improvement and an eye for detail I bet you wold be one heck of a flash animator. But I can tell your just beginning. With some time and patience I know you'll make it to the top here. I was going to give you a meager simple 2/5 but I think you deserve a tiny bit more on your score honestly for your troubles and efforts. A 2 in a half out of 5 and a 2/5 in voting power. I hope you keep improving and contributing here. I hope you've enjoyed this review. Good day.