I actually dont mind it. Put in some Bg's fix the basic flaws that you mentioned and the obviously make it longer so we know what the clown is shooting at. the muzzle flash really could use some work but no biggy. I do like the expression on his face. Should make a short animation. I feel you have the full potential to make something fun to watch. Good luck and I'll keep an eye out from more.
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Another short animation snippet. This is more rotoscoped work, this time something original. For a movie that I am filming. The reason the clown is cut in half is because he is supposed to be hiding behind a live action tree, as in the icon.
And yes, I do realize that there are some inconsistencies, like the gun losing it's color for two frames, and the clown's bowtie disappearing, and others that I didn't notice but that you might. But I'm to lazy to fix it, because I'm an idiot and a terrible, lazy animator.
Bon appe-die
spacezoomer responds:
Sorry for the late response, but thanks! This is actually a small clip of a much larger movie that I have yet to finish. You can see the clip with the background in my animation demo reel on my YouTube channel. Thanks again very much for the feedback!
Looked okay.. was to short...