It's a start.
I don't see much point in uploading something that's unfinished to Newgrounds though. Newgrounders generally rate previews low in both voting & review score and are only well-received if they're something everybody generally wants to see (It's A Halo Thing).
First of all, I must say that it was annoying to have the music continue even after it was over. This can easily be fixed by setting 'Event' to 'Stream'. It syncs with the fight and it stops playing when the movie stops. Best of both worlds.
Lastly, I'd personally advise that you stay away from gradients, unless they are subtle or actually look good. Gradients, especially default gradients, have a very obvious amateurish ring to it, and the viewer can easily tell.
the talk text goes by too fast to read the whole thing, i had to watch this three times just to get all of what he was saying. interesting vid, though i have to take a few points off for the fact it was too short for my taste considering what it could have been.
short loud and boring it might be beter after you finish it i guess
looked good, but the text when't to fast, and sometimes when he walked he disappeared then reappeared..