Hey kid don't take it personal, most the people who review videos on newgrounds dont have any idea how to use flash,how to draw ,animate or anything. Newgrounds is not what it used to be, the slogan "Everything by everyone" needs to be changed to "A few things by AAA Class Professionals". These days the standards of flash videos are so high, its difficult to get high ratings and good reviews because most of the time people have seen better. My only advice is make sure your videos have a story( Beginning, middle and end), while your drawings don't have to be outstanding, making them clear and understandable is key same goes with animating. You will attract people with originality. Anyway Just keep making flashes for yourself not for others. I've given up on newgrounds, while i believed back in the day it was an actual place for people to upload their flash movies, today I believe its a place simply for money purposes. Take Care

Pretty crappy. It's not even a video. way to short.

you made this cartoon in one second

... Please dont post anything until its REALLY done
n put more effort into it
if you don't want improvement than stop animating
you wont go anywhere that way.

Wayy to short
colors are bland
Frames need to be smoother with each transistion