The enitre wanna-be anime style is just stupid, try to venture as far from it in your future projects.
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Okay, so I recently got a tablet, and this is my first attempt at an animation. I don't have any music or sound, so if anyone would like to suggest something, feel free.
I don't get it, but it seems lame. My theory is that you put in no music or sound because you were too lazy.
Norikata responds:
No, I just couldn't work out how :P Although it is true I am extremely lazy...
Would have suggested some DBZ audio, however dont know how that would fit the penis in at the end. Hope you add some sound tho. Good luck and nice job.
Norikata responds:
Thanks!
This shows promise to me for you as an author of content, decent art, but there's not enough content here for me to vote a pass on this, sorry man, but seriously, keep trying!
Norikata responds:
I completely understand. I realised after I uploaded it wasn't that great without sound... I might try add some stuff then re-upload. Thanks for the Feedback!
It's a good animation, but if it's your first try at animating, it should go into dumping grounds, not the portal.
It's still a pretty good first try.
Norikata responds:
Again, I'm extremely new. I have literally got no idea how to get around here. i'm guessing the dumping grounds is for experiments? Anyway, thanks for the feedback!