The purpose of flash is to convey something that can't be simply expressed in a review or comment. This flash had no actual animation and would have been better received as a review or a PM to the creator.

The music was nice, but the "flash" was boring! There was no color, no pictures, nothing. It would've been better to have a peaceful picture (your drawings, not a photo grabbed from google) at one side and have the words scrolling on the other side. For example, a tree with falling leaves, next to a peaceful stream. The leaves slowly fall as the text scrolls. Maybe have several pictures as the flash proceeds. Start with a flower, and have it bloom. Then go to the beach and have waves. Then go to the tree with the leaves falling. Have the text be a nice, gentle, but easy to read font. Anything too complex may make it hard to read.

Also, be aware if your spelling. You wanna know what happens when you submit poorly spelled text? People read it just like this: (remove space)

http://www.newgroun ds.com/portal/view/558516

Hope that helps. :)

Nice

This goes against everything concerning integrity that I believe in, but I am going to give this a five anyway, just to make sure it doesn't get blamed.

Heads up, kids.

(Don't look too forward to meeting your passed loved ones though, they want to meet you again as late as possible up there)

No. Why do we need to know something you adressed at the one person of all 2m users? The actual quality is mediocre, but still...