Eeep....There's no discernable story and I'm not going to go on about the animation. Just put some effort into everything and take your time to produce something better next time.

dafaq was that?

The animation skills shown here need a lot of work, but the worst offender here is the lack of any comprehensible story. As far as I know, this is just a collection of images/choppy animations loosely strung together in a flash. Just by looking at this, I would have no idea what it's even about. In short, work on both your animation skills and story presentation.

what did i just watch...?