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Dragon's Tear, chapter 1

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A very quickly done animation to supplement a reading of a short story my sister wrote when she was 13. As the chapters go on, there are only more and more wonderfully preteen cliches, so hold on tight and enjoy the thrilling adventure of servant girl (and secret princess/fairy) Maylab.

Reviews


with a title like Dragon's Tear, it is funny but i think you should take it more seriously and have a more deep plot wit strong feeling, descriptions and of course, DRAGONS. its not bad but certainly not good. i like it. all i ask is to take the story seriously, make the voices unique and maybe get some other people to help.



Better than my writing.



Amateur.



after the first few moments I thought I had enough... I could read better than understand the commentary... (hint put in text and make it go slower)



I do like this story. Got some chuckles outa me, very good going!


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Credits & Info

Views
3,508
Votes
253
Score
2.78 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 25, 2012
1:52 AM EDT
Genre
Comedy - Original