For at test, it's pretty good. But if you want to make it better add sound. Otherwise your okay.
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This is just a short animation i did to test out my new Wacom Bamboo Tablet.
Looks promising! :D
You aren't the first, but I'll say it again... Y'all need to finish your shit before you post it. Period. If you want to practice making movies, that's totally cool, but keep them stored on your computer or pad, and show them to your friends before you post them on NG! I'll even give you a two out of ten for trying. Hell, I can dig even posting these "practice" vids on the NG, but if you want to test a new program (or for whatever other reason), post an actual feature... If you post stuff like this, you're just going to be torn another asshole from other, less than generous users who aren't afraid to speak their minds. At least give your reputation a fighting chance... practice or not.
Nice art, animation is pretty good too. :)