this video is very erre. but then i have met some one that dose not know how to put a game in the constio, and she was 15.

the animation was ok and so was the audio, i've seen worse and heard worse. But im in agreement with OhMyCaptain. Not only did you delay the punch lines themself but you did overplayed jokes as well. stuff that I've seen, heard, masturbated--err thought of multiple times that its not funny nor amusing to even think of anymore. Areas that you could improve would be better animation, small things (example: Pupils) can make even the most of simple animations pretty damn good. Audio, and usally a big one, is always another way to make animations more interesting. Your problem was that there was alot of static in the background. Usally getting rid of that would make it less pain in most peoples ears and less comments of people getting pissed about it. Lastly, for you is better comedy. Like i said before, these jokes where kinda boring and not very funny. (ignoring the guy under me completly :P) As i could tell, you were going for the more goofy kind of comedy or failure to do simple tasks via: play video games. Something that would of made a couple more laughs would probably be other than the person trying to put the game in multiple different ways wrong, maybe should have tried to put it in wrong once. got angry and could of just launched the game system into the tv. Thats just an idea i came up with in my head so i'm pretty sure there are alot more different case scenerios that would be more funny. I hope this review would help you in your future videos if you decide to make more.

One out of Five.

Funny :)

I'm sorry, I'll give you a few points for trying, but altogether this flash just kindof irritated me. The jokes would've been really funny if the flash animated deliveries of such jokes didn't take so long to throw in the punch lines. Not to mention if I actually knew what I was watching... Two people? Bald Eagles? What is this? It was altogether confusing and the characters deep black empty eyes with the entire flash being absent of color just made it boring and uninteresting. It was like a black and white film from the early 30's only without the annoying/catchy music for each scene. Instead it was replaced with shoddy mic recordings and an even worse picture than those of the very earliest cameras. I'm sorry for ragging on this so much, but I like to see quality posted on Newgrounds, not random flashes of 5yr quality. Come on now people, we are all of at least middle school age now. We're not toddlers.

Where is the effort?