OK FUNNY

Run girl run! XD

For what it it, I would say- good job. :) 3/10

As far as remaining on the site, though, I've got to say that it's lacking. :\ 0/5

Newgrounds is for finished items. But people have been submitting tests, demos, parts, bits, and such for so long that it's started to get thru, and now people don't know what to do. This is a good example. It's kinda good, so should it get blammed? It's not a story, a finished animation, a completed project; it's a mostly finished loop. Should it stay on here with the finished items? This is good, but it's totally lacking in what it needs to stay.

If it passes, this will forever be an unfinshed bit floating around here, since you won't ever finish it. You'll upload the finished item as a new file, and we'll have both here.

And that's one of the biggest problems Newgrounds has now. Unfinished bits and what to do with them. :\

You also might want to go to the "Creator Resources" link at the bottom of the page. There are tutorials to help with learning techniques to be better in Flash. You can also go to the search at the top of the page and search for 'tutorial' in games. It's not a tutorial for games. It's that most tuts are interactive, with buttons and such, so they're in the games section. And youtube has tutorials; search for 'flash tutorial' and you'll find lotsa stuff.

Hope this helps. :)