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Due to my poor writing skills, any spelling or grammatical corrections/critiques are welcome.
This is a "Character Story", which is a prequel and character side stories that will not be shown in my series/story "The Other Side".

This is the Monster's "Character Story", who is inspired by Naruto.

Music: Nier OST by Keiichi Okabe
Check out the rest of the characters: http://youtu.be/8OUZoGdh5Nc


wow. ok:
Storyline:Your story is pretty good, I don't know how she survived the attack without using her power, but that's minor, it could be a bonus with her power. Anyways... The story was clear and flowed evenly and well.

Character design: your characters are well drawn out. I quite enjoyed how the straw man looked a little like Loofy from One Piece and your character sort of looked like a misfit hero/ misunderstood badguy.

Sound: I would have loved to hear voices in this video, but you did get a good choice of music, at any rate.

All in all, I have nothing really to say against your video and furthermore, I look forward to watching your Other Side movies.

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exninja123 responds:

glad you enjoyed it! :D

whatever...it was awesome.
lol but what about the other side? is this some rango shit? hahaha

exninja123 responds:

lol, thanks! xD

jaw dropingly amazing!

exninja123 responds:

thanks! :)

That was the best story I have seen, most of all the drawings are very good.
Keep up the work.

exninja123 responds:

Thanks! :)

I liked the drawings, the story engaging and catchy music!

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exninja123 responds:

Thank you! :D

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3.75 / 5.00

Jun 27, 2012
4:50 PM EDT
  • Daily 3rd Place June 29, 2012