That was kinda weird. Nice for a first animation though, my first animation was a lot worse!
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just some butter nuts they give me autotune and turn me green .... is that normal also do butternuts exhist .. voicing was well done by silentmrdave idk how to add him in the credits yea imma noob
MRCHUBBYMUNKEY responds:
well thanks sir
don't waste peoples time, and valuable data space by posting this garbage.
The draw is nice but the animation was not fluid so for that you lose 2.5 stars.
There is not sound but is normal because is only a character that speak so i do nothing there.
You add voice but there is no emotion in your voice so for that you lose .5 stars.
Try to make something more long. With a story or a compilation of joke because only one is to short. You not need to be something of 10 minutes. Only 2 or 3 will be enough.
Work your animation, try to make that this character is more real. Animate more thing not only the arm and the mouth. For example, make him move his head in when the think that I think is a muffins come closer of his head or his others arms go on his mouth like he will vomit.
Is by forging that one becomes blacksmith, continue working and you will become better and better.
MRCHUBBYMUNKEY responds:
thanks i will do all of that in the future.. thanks for the honesty
No that's not normal, and butternuts are real, they are sort of like walnuts. Nonetheless, the movie is rather, for lack of a better descriptive word, crappily done. Try working with something longer and more interesting, or make the topic interesting.
Sincerely,
thedethbot
MRCHUBBYMUNKEY responds:
ok and oh now i know that they are real