Awesome but the animating could be improved. Other than that i loved it.
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This is a project for my Computer Animation class at my college. mainly it's just a test of my animating skills so far, as I have just started animating. I'm not great..... Or good for that matter. However, I would love some constructive criticism. It would help to improve this animation for my portfolio.
I want to do a lot more with this character and the video as a whole. However, I feel I'm a bit of a noob at the moment when it comes to this stuff. So I guess I'll wait till I sharpen my skills a bit.
Anyways, I hope someone likes this and I look forward to reading your thoughts. Constructive and otherwise...
The song is titled "Yakety Sax" by Benny Hill
I borrowed (For educational purposes) some images from quickmeme.com of the table flip guy and the like a sir guy... The mob comes from google. Anyways, all credit for those go to the original artist. Zomboy, however, is my own creation.
Again, keep in mind I'm just starting out with flash and I suck major nuts at this... For now...
midnafan1 responds:
I thought the same thing. Sadly I had to rush it a bit because all my other classes are far more demanding. I'm going to work on it more and I actually have the legs and arms made. I just have to put them in and smooth out a bunch of the rough edges.
Thanks for taking the time to comment. It's appreciated. :D
oh meme
midnafan1 responds:
I spend any freetime I have on memebase or 9gag... lol Then I promptly pass out on my keyboard.
XD very funny, but it would be better if it had an end and not an infinite loop.
midnafan1 responds:
I haven't really learned how to add a play button yet. So yeah... That's top priority on my to do list. Once I get a cleaner version made, I'll re upload this and go from there. Thanks a bunch for commenting.
Well to be your first animation is not that bad, its funny after all, but you should improve the animations, put some sounds and voices on it and you could do a good animation because this maked me laugh with the guy who puts a mustache on him to hide from the other guys xD
midnafan1 responds:
General census is pointing at the animation. Haha... I'll definitely work on it. :D
Also, I'm going to start making my own sounds and voices soon when I get a good quality mic and audio software. I'll have to see how that goes. I have a very monotone voice. @__@ VERY monotone!
I might get my wife involved if she's feeling up to it... Or maybe my little girl when she gets old enough to understand what it is I'm asking her to do. lol
quite good actually if i do say so my self. indeed it has the makings of a series worth watching. and on that note i bid thee good day sir
midnafan1 responds:
And good day to you! :)