i said it on the one you did before and i´ll say it on this one as well, i like the animation and the sprite are pretty good, the only thing is that is a bit 2 short and a few grammar mistakes but hey im not a grammar nazi and im here for the figh and story not lettera! : D as far as the story goes i believe that you have a story planed so im sure things will only get better, once again i wish you luck and i´ll be lookin forward for your next one : D just one thing....could you please not loop the movie? lol