I'm agreeing with HadoukenDude on this one. It was good, but the voices did need some work.
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"Luigi and Toad Door to Door"
Well, its some time since i last decided to do a flash, not much more to say i guess.
Joining me this time is the awesome voice actor HoodedCobraGreen.
Decent. Not very amusing, but an OK flash. Voices need to be worked on a bit. Annoying voices aren't always funny, you just need to know where and how to implement the joke. This one fell flat before it even ended. Remember guys, timing is everything.
Figter responds:
You got a valid point there, we will keep this in mind as we go on.
Thanks for the feedback.
*knock knock* OH SHIT!
Figter responds:
*BOOM*
The joke was good, and funny, but it was difficult to understand at first. perhaps text would've been an easier choice
actually no, because that would've ruined the joke at the end. Meh, just make the voices a bit clearer, wojld've been fine.
Figter responds:
Thans dude, thats something we will try.
This is not a bad submission. I just had a had time understanding what they were saying.
Figter responds:
At first mayby its hard to understand it, strangely i understood it the first time hearing it.
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