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So not bad

Love the musical score excited to see where you go with this. I am very interested!

I was confused by this, because I thought it was a game at first. It just seemed to be a loop of Madness stuff. That being said, I still thought this wasn't that bad. It mostly worked because it was great to see all these different deaths. I guess that might sound morbid, but most people are like that anyway. It's interesting to see what different details those characters will have.

I thought the music was also pretty appropriate. I like how you're trying to set up a dramatic story for these characters. It might not have been intended that way, but it's how I interpreted it. I did not look at the first couple of versions of this. This really has potential.

Could do better with more stuff in the background and more detail in general.