its off to a good start but theirs so much more you can do
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Kirby accidently threw a bomb at Sonic and Abby (made of version of Amy) and Sonic wants to kill him, but this is part 1 of the adventure, and steve, (2D version) joins the brawl. will our charactors survive?
lolsepicface111 responds:
thanks! I'll try my best later on.
I couldn't really tell what was happening much, but the idea seems like it could turn into something with a bit more development and thought.
There were a few problems I had with this flash.
1. No background. A grey background with sprites flying across it could be improved on.
2. Its a little short. I think you could easily put parts one and two together.
3. I'm kind of lost on the story line.
Kirby throws a bomb hits sonic and then steve comes into the picture somehow?
lolsepicface111 responds:
(just posting desc, maybe now you can follow.)
Kirby accidently threw a bomb at Sonic and Abby (made of version of Amy) and Sonic wants to kill him, but this is part 1 of the adventure, and steve, (2D version) joins the brawl. will our charactors survive?
There is a lot of, nothing. I mean I find my self waiting around a lot.
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