Liked it, but needed English sub titles for some of the more ignorant members of this website.
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Titled in English; The Owl and the Beetle is a quick presentation of pure tween animation.
A project for my french class.
Moi même étant français, j'ai trouvé cette histoire bien faite, avec une bonne morale, mais il y a tout de même certaines erreurs :
Le mot scarabée est MASCULIN, donc "une scarabée" est une erreur ; de même pour "petite insecte"
Le "a-t-émergé" est aussi, en soi, une erreur car le "-t-" ne se place que après un verbe de parole, par exemple "crie-t-il" est correct.
Ce sera tout, bonne continuation !
Being french by myself, I found this story quite well made, a good moral and everything BUT there is still some mistakes :
The french "une scarabée" is one of your mistakes, "un scarabée" is correct though ... The same for "petites insectes"
The "a-t-émergé" is, by itself, a mistake too because the "-t-" is only placed after a "speak" verb (I'm sorry for my bad english ...! ^^).
That's all.
FightForSushi responds:
I can't begin to say how grateful I am for your feedback!
Thank you for taking the time for such a detailed review, it was very helpful, and I'm extremely flattered that you enjoyed it.