Le Hibou et La Scrabee

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Titled in English; The Owl and the Beetle is a quick presentation of pure tween animation.

A project for my french class.


Liked it, but needed English sub titles for some of the more ignorant members of this website.

Moi même étant français, j'ai trouvé cette histoire bien faite, avec une bonne morale, mais il y a tout de même certaines erreurs :
Le mot scarabée est MASCULIN, donc "une scarabée" est une erreur ; de même pour "petite insecte"
Le "a-t-émergé" est aussi, en soi, une erreur car le "-t-" ne se place que après un verbe de parole, par exemple "crie-t-il" est correct.

Ce sera tout, bonne continuation !

Being french by myself, I found this story quite well made, a good moral and everything BUT there is still some mistakes :
The french "une scarabée" is one of your mistakes, "un scarabée" is correct though ... The same for "petites insectes"
The "a-t-émergé" is, by itself, a mistake too because the "-t-" is only placed after a "speak" verb (I'm sorry for my bad english ...! ^^).

That's all.

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3.14 / 5.00

May 17, 2012
2:59 PM EDT