I enjoyed the script and voice acting though i wasn't a huge fan of the art style. Some of the colours were a bit garish but the mouths with their large teeth were quite unique and i liked that. The lip synching was decent and the facial expressions were comical, it was perhaps all a bit static but the script didn't demand that much movement.
You blended the photo backgrounds well with the vector foregrounds and the drawn backgrounds were good too. The pacing was good (which is very important with comedy) and the characters were all interesting and distinct. Some good work!