As a game developer, I actually like this movie. I could help out if you plan to make a series. It has some potential, and learning of the character's backgrounds would help add to that.
Also learning who the dark cloaks are would be cool. All three characters are cool; knowing who Edgar is, like his race, would be cool.
I give 5 stars for the creativity, and effort. As a creator myself, I know how hard it is to finish something. I hope you return and make this into something. The music was cool, and the so was the story!