This was an alright flash film in its own diginified way. Honestly though the only thing that brings me into making the score a fair "Neutral" score is instead of watching a film I'm forced to push the "Talk Button" in order to continue into this short's plot. Art wise is plain, simple and bland. I wished there was a bit of voice acting and atleast some music to accompany the skit, even if its for just a minute. Again the score would be much more high had you follow more critiques in this but I'm merciful enough to give you a solid 3/5 for your work intead of two and a half. I also bestow you a 3/5 on voting this into submission. Again good try for a first, Keep at it in perfection and you'll do wonderful in your future of animation!