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A Cloud's Day At The Pond

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If you have a slow computer, I reccommend using the Dim Lights. This is much longer than the last one, and it has more effort into it. I hope you enjoy this one more, because I do!

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Thanks for not asking to use my song first. Overall it was a really random vid.


Natty23 responds:

I had to ask first? Sorry about that...


that was pretty good i guess


Natty23 responds:

Thanks!


Hmm, the part in the beginning was poorly drawn. the pond and grass looked lazy. Please use the brush tool, it makes a big difference.

ahh, finally some decent use of slapstick humor with the cloud in the beginning. well-executed, i must say!

the water splash was brilliant. but right after that, with the cloud in the pond, were you tweening a bitmap? why couldn't you have just tweened the object drawn in Flash? it sacrifices quality

the boy getting stuck in the cloud, i have to admit, was pretty bad. his arms felt like blobs and you're overusing the slapstick. one slapstick joke is okay but this webdings show is practically built around slapstick.

but the thunder was awesome.

i think the preloader should appear in the beginning, by the way.

IN CONCLUSION
it was a nice flash with a few errors and amazing special effects


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Natty23 responds:

Sorry about the grass and pond. The part where you said "were you tweening a bitamp?" It was a video edited in Movie Maker 6.0 to add a wave effect to it to give it more of an underwater look. Thanks for the suggestion of the preloader and the compliments of the water splash and thunder. Thanks for reviewing!

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May 6, 2012
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