i was wondering the whole time whether or not yu were trying to be serious..i thought there was gunna be a joke at the end..but the sudden realization that yu were being serious was funny in itself..thats why yu got 2 humor points =)
Just let me get some things straight
You're trying to do a fantasy project in the year 2002?
Princess Hirotimo, I assume, is the daughter of the emperor at this time, Emperor Akihito?
She wears medieval English clothing and traditional Japanese wooden shoes on a walk in the woods?
Her guardian fights with a sword and ninja stars?
Their enemies are the demons of the Otoko clan?
On a mission for peace negotiations, the bodyguard kills two demons?
Bubitsu takes one of the Emperor's daughters with him on peace negotiations with terrorists?
These terrorists focus their activities on villages?
You've got a few problems with your storyline, if you ask me. Do some research first. Or don't. It's up to you. After all, they do say, "Never let the truth get in the way of a good story."
Can't say I've ever heard "Never let common sense get in the way of a good story," though, but I'd say it probably applies as well, n'est pas?
The story kicks ass but...
The graphics need a lot of work, and maybe you could do something about princess hitomi's voice, an upcoming love scene with a voice like that isn't too apealing I understand that making these things isn't too easy (especially since I'm not too good with it) but I'm sure you could put a lil more effort into it, other that that this thing has some potential, I'll definitely keep watching it as long as its made allways praying that the graphics will improve...
animation was bad
but everything else was good... the story looks really exciting; hope to see the series continued. Voice acting could be worked on a bit too. Damn, I'd hate to see the women of that demon clan. They'd cut your balls off!
Alright... The animation seemed really awkward; you could really tell that u just moved a bunch of large stills around the screen, and when you didn't (i.e. eyebrows, mouth) it seemed really awkward looking, kinda sluggish too. Oh well, i know it took you a while to make, i just hope your animation skills grow a bit more...