While I would normally give credit for the smooth movements, I don't think this is what that's supposed to look like. I'm not going to really dig into this because it looks like you were either screwing around or experimenting. And I know that drawing detailed pictures and adding sounds would be rather complicated and may defeat the purpose of "screwing around" but this just seems bad. Take a little pride in your work. And the only part I kinda chuckled at was the "coming out March 2010" at the very end, unless this was made before then, in which case I hope you've improved a bit since then.
Good luck in your future endeavors!