Ok, I can understand that some may not like the art (which may need work) and some of the sound-effects, but that's no reason at all to vote this one down for me.
The storytelling in this flashmovie is definitely above average. Maybe a bit old-school, but I really, really like that! Some good action sequences, a well-paced development of the story arc, even some film noir references - and the end feels just right for this.
I would love to see more of such movies here on NG, no doubt.