Yeap.

Terrible, Very bad drawing style, very short, and lacking in every aspect. Try again when you improve your drawing style, and i'll think about it.

First off, it's just text and the text falling. I thought it was the opening credits when it had already ended.
Second, add sound. I have never found a good flash movie with no sound.
Third, don't rush it. Good animations take time to do. Quality over quantity.
Fourth, Simultaneous actions make things look more realistic and less robotic. Lack of this in the animation made it look sort of blocky.
Fifth, Use actual font for the text. It makes for a better and smoother animation.
Sixth, have a play button and replay button. A loop is only good for certain flash movies, and this, having a screen that blatantly says it ended, isn't one of them.
Seventh, continuing the series? Why not just put it all in one animation if it's that short?
Eighth, Use a thinner pen. Pen thickness is to add depth, but doing this actually made it flatter.
Ninth, Blend the colors for the explosion.
Tenth, Have a background.
I hope this helps.