uhh...I dunno..its kinda funny
Author Comments
Hey everyone, this is my first ever animation so this may be a little subpar. I am a beginning animator, and I'm looking to hone my animating here on Newgrounds. I will be reading all your comments, whether it be good or bad. (If you're planning to do the latter, please make it constructive. I'll need as much tips as I could absorb.)
Thanks for viewing, enjoy!
EDIT: I apologize for not putting a replay button at the end as I was made aware of this just recently. It was n00b mistake, it won't happen again.
I give the audio title screen one star, for how it perfectly fits in. The pencil at the start should have been a play button, that then showed the static.
I didn't quite understand the storyline, the screaming was perfect, however sounded like it was looped. The voices were hardly hearable.
Make sure you make a replay button at the end and not make it loop until the end of time.
True, voice isn't that good. Except the screaming. That's a Lol.
NOT TOO SHABBY
Bad vioce acting and it loops