not bad...
Author Comments
SO I wish I had more time with 33d Animation. I always wanted to do more with it, but this is all i have. I figured I post it. My real passion is doing enviroment stuff, not character animation as much.
There is some animation missing since I didn't save but whatever, lol. I ust want to be able to share this with my friends and show people what I've done in flash so far, so when I make really cool stuff people can laugh at my bad art.
tell me what you think!
not bad- when its finished it'll be interesting
I really like your camera angles and staging- it really creates a nice sense of depth and in the moment
Well I rather do like the choice of music, it does give off a feel of waking up in the morning.. however I think you could add to this with some background sounds, like the air plain motor(not to loud of course) even the sound of the lift or stabbing the.. orange was it?
my favorite thing about this though has to be the sett outdoors, I'd love to see it in more detail.
It's things like this that are destroying Newgrounds.
How should I vote on this? What's here is good. What's here is entertaining and hints at an enjoyable finished item.
But that's the problem. It's unfinished. There's just enough here to be considered 'good.' But there's not enough here to be considered 'finished' so how should I vote?
If I vote 0, then this could be blammed, and if it's not finished, why should it be on here with all the things that ARE completed? But this has some good in it, so is a 0 accurate for what was submitted? Not really. But what's the alternative?
If I vote 2, which is the minimum score to pass it, then if it passes, it will forever be unfinished because you'll submit the finished item as it's own file, so we'll have both the finished and unfinished versions on here. And, no, you can't delete it later. At least not without sending a few messages off to Wade or the mods and asking it to be deleted, and few authors ever do that. I can't vote higher than 2, because 3, 4, and 5 are scores that should go to finished items that deserve a full score, and this isn't finished. Think about it; who would give a 4 or 5 to half a story?
This is the debate, and this is what's destroying Newgrounds. No one wants to blam something that has some good in it, but no one wants Newgrounds full of halves and parts and bits and tests. This isn't Testgrounds, after all, right? But so much unfinished stuff gets thru now because people see unfinished things on here right next to all the finished stuff, and no one knows what's supposed to be here now; finished, unfinished, or both.
I like what's done. I wish it was all done. I may pass this to use it as an example when explaining the "Too good to blam, but too unfinished to pass" issue to people. Would like to see it finished, tho.