its pretty cute and its decent for just practice
I'd judge this as an actual animation, but since you said it was just made for practice, I guess I'll leave my constructive criticisms here.
- His hand in the beginning was way too jittery. Consistency when inbetweening is always a good thing.
-Those clouds are oddly shaped.
-Your drawings are a bit too simplistic. Simplistic is not necessarily a bad thing, but they don't have an element that is visually appealing. Look at how simple the drawings from the Powerpuff Girls are, but they have certain elements that make that sorta thing acceptable.
-The animation when he is talking is really stiff sometimes.
-Him bending over was badly done. Arcs can help in this case.
-That drawing of him at the end should have been held on-screen longer.
Well, that's it, here is a 3/5 for potential
Thank you very much :)
*sniff* Bravo Hyperbolime.. (bravo)