Some improvements needed but overall I found it very good. Good sound quality, good comedy, okay animation, but it was meant to be bad by the looks of it - no offense if it wasn't :D
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Edit: Pre-loader looked like shit, so I fixed that real quick.
Edit 2: Adjusted the audio a bit so it wouldn't kill peoples ears no mo.
First ever COMPLETED flash. So judge me. Judge me good ._.
Made for all those people who were posting pictures of their brooms during the solar flares or what ever the fuck. They took up my damn news feed for 4 days straight. I made this a while back but never added voices to it till...today. So here it is. Late. Probably not that funny. But fuck it. It might make someone laugh so I'm just going to throw this out there.
If you're interested I'm currently in the middle of 3 other animations as well as having a friend (he does the laugh in this video) write a story for a series. So keep posted.
davohsaurus responds:
No you got the nail on the head bro. It was just meant as a quick something something. It's looking like next animation is going to be mostly be lip syncing and occasional animations. I'm still working my way up to full length-fully animated stuff.
For your first completed flash, I thought this was very good. A very simplistic style, fairly similar to Oney's earliest works. I thought the humor was decent, the sound quality was very good, and the animation that was present wasn't too bad.
Well done.
davohsaurus responds:
Thank you! It's just to put my feet in the water and see where my skills stand and what not. Regardless of this getting blamed or not, the positive feed back I'm getting is inspiring me to keep on keepin' on!
This has been a public service announcement from "I don't give a shit please stop fucking posting this wanker-fest".
It's a very brief cartoon, more like a slideshow presentation. The sound quality is inconsistent--some of the screams are way to loud and will startle the unwary, which is everyone--and finally, it does reek of first-time-ever attempt at Flash. I remember when my brother submitted one about Master Chief way back during Halo 2 (he has since gotten rid of it to perk up his batting average). I bet this one will go the wayside as well, assuming that future submissions by davosaurus will be far better.
It's still worth a couple belly laughs, deriding the idiocy of standing up a broom during a solar flare. Now we have to go and research this to make sure it isn't some urban myth or larger-than-usual deception that's easily replicable. Anyway, davo should submit something soon, get his recording levels down pat, and make us laugh in better ways than spewing hate on a bunch of idiots. There are things that deserve our attention, which is pretty much the point of this presentation. Put money where mouth is.
davohsaurus responds:
Yeah, this was my first stab with a draw pad and I'm still getting used to it but still wanted to make something. I have some projects in the near future and am going to play with the audio levels some more so I don't bust ear drums.
All in all, I have to say thanks for pointing out the flaws and there will be improvement.
I pissed myself everytime it got loud. Was funny though! 4/5
davohsaurus responds:
Sorry I'm still trying to master audio levels and such, but thanks!
Ha i liked this animation; it had good humor and i liked the animation style, however, this being your first flash, i must say, fantastic work! you have a lot ahead of you. i like to see more from you!
davohsaurus responds:
:D THANK YOU! I'll be sure to post some more stuff soon.