DAVID LIN I AM THE JON THAT HE IS TALKING ABOUT and yes that is my voice we are planing something new and not rushed so wait for it.........maybe.
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Before you think we are weird, know that this was extra credit.
WE DID NOT MAKE THIS BECAUSE OF A FETISH FOR RESPIRATION.
Well, at least Jon didn't...
This was made several months ago, pretty much rushed, and it embarrassed Jon a lot, so David (me) was pleased. It was brought up again during review for the finals, so I decided to upload it and embarrass Jon even more.
I hope you try your best to watch this horribly animated depiction of science. But hey, at least it will leave a scar in you forever with reminiscents of the Citric Cycle...
Some references you might not get:
>"Spargi'Ball" is a reference to our fair teacher, Mrs. Spargifiore.
>That wanted poster is indeed a picture of Jon. But it's outdated so you probably can't track him down anymore.
>The small animations that was supposed to be included with the credits were removed since they weren't exactly quite appropriate for school. I wanted to embarrass Jon more....
>Yes, there's something after the credits. Originally it was supposed to be Jon there, but, uh, well, school has rules.
It did not let me retry the battle, it just froze on the scientist jacking off onto carbon dioxide. I love the idea of this, the commentary made me laugh considerably. The animation was not as bad as the art, and the art was not as bad as the audio. haha it was pretty bad, but I enjoyed it, I hope you guys get better and produce things like this in higher quality. I think you have my exact sense of humor, so please continue to animate.
Story/Plot: It was ok, and only OK. The whole glycolysis thing was a bit outthere. I mean it kinda of made sense, but for someone who has no pre-existing knowledge of cellular respiration and does not know its importance - this was probably a really mediocre representation of it . ---- Just change the subject and if you could make things alot more clear when dealing with topics involving science.
Sound: The sound was pretty clear, however some of the music was kind of bland. The voice actor could have been better. ---- When speaking have your voice as clear as possible, and use music that at least will sound like it would compliment your flash ( better than here ).
Animation: It was not the best, but it was alright for the most part. --- I mean it probably would have been better to just have used 3-d dots as molecules - but if this was for extra credit I guess that would not matter too much.
Overall you could have increased its entertainment side - but since its kind a hard to do that with Respiration - I think it deserves a 2.5
This is an actually pretty funny representation of glycolysis. I'm in biology and I learned this so it was even funnier. :D
The only problem was the animation (but you guys knew that.).
So informational.