Your stuff has been getting better somewhat. The content after color was introducted felt as though it were randomly placed. The little conflict at the beginning was kind of interesting, but then the audience never sees it again after you introduce video game characters and other whacky stuff. I felt like those things at the end really detracted from the beginning.

The animation in the beginning was better too, it could stand to have some more frames and cleaner linework though.

Hope that helps.

it was kinda good, only problem is that the animation could've been smoother but it wasn't and seemed too stiff, but it's good drawing.

Thought it was very creative with how the animation flowed, though simple as it was. The music is nice to listen to as well in places too, it presents your work well ^^.